As mentioned earlier I received feedback today from my tutor and course mates about my monologue Dear Amy. Taking that on board, I redrafted the second draft into the new and improved shiny THIRD DRAFT. All that’s really changed is changing it from a letter to a video log but I think I managed it pretty well.
The next step based on any new feedback on this post will be to rejig the structure and how some of the tale is told but I just wanted to convert it mainly at the moment from the old “format” to the new one. I have linked the PDF below, I hope you guys enjoy.
- Dear Amy, – Five Minute Monologue – Draft 2! (wordsformwindows.com)
- Dear Amy – Update (wordsformwindows.com)
- Dear Amy, (Draft 1) (wordsformwindows.com)