It’s done! The first draft of my feature film with the new working title Dawn: An Awakening.
It comes in at just over 57 pages. The minimum amount is 90 so I have 33 pages to work with whilst adding some back story and subplots which I have spoken about in previous posts. As I went along and finished up this first draft I kept a log of changes I want to make, just little things I won’t to go back and add etc to help with continuity and maybe add a bit more drama.
Both the script and the changes are at the bottom. Feel free to have a read, I can’t wait to hear everyone’s feedback on this one.
Also, as a little incentive, the first 10 people to reblog this can have a character named after them if you so desire. I have a character just called PROGRAMMER at the moment. He featured in the script more than I thought so I think he deserves a name (or she) and with the new scenes I am sure there will be other characters created.
Without further ado, here is the script and the changes.
- Rewriting Your Script, Part 10: Final Edit (gointothestory.blcklst.com)
- DAWN: Scene by Scene [DRAFT 1] (wordsformwindows.com)
- DAWN: Synopsis – Draft 2 (wordsformwindows.com)
- Rewriting Your Script, Part 8: Revision Outline (gointothestory.blcklst.com)