Come With Me – Complete First Draft

I have finally finished the short story I have been working on and strangely I managed to finish dot on 4,000 words aha.

I have attached the file for those of you who would like to read the full thing, I know a few people would like to know what happens to Eric in the end, so this is for you. And anyone else who stumbles across it for that matter, I hope you enjoy my writing and if you have feedback I would leave to hear it.

Thanks again!

*Update* I have recently made some revisions to the story and have uploaded the newer story, it is no longer 4,000 words exactly.

Come With Me – WordPress PDF

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4 thoughts on “Come With Me – Complete First Draft

  1. Wow, it’s amazing! I really love that story. Lucy is like a breath of fresh air in Eric’s life. I’m so glad you wrote a happy ending, I couldn’t bear it if it ended with Eric watching Lucy disapear through the portal. Lucy is so awesome – she’s so childlike but knowledgable at the same time.

    1. Thank you so much (: That’s how I wanted her to come across so I guess I’ve been successful (: Thanks again for the comments, have you any feedback at all or do you think it’s fine how it is (:?

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